http://jamigold.com/2013/10/4-tips-to-solve-99-of-your-writing-problems/#comment-165120

I’ve had this page open in my browser for the better part of a week. The tips presented are great examples of how to make good writing even better. The before and after examples are like night and day, with the after examples having me eager to find the rest of the story. I need to know if Bob survives!

Go read! Not only will you learn a few things that will help your writing or editing, you’ll have a bit of fun.